The following poem was inspired by Trent Chau’s amazing photograph. You can learn more about his photography and take part in the picture prompt challenge today @ One Stop Poetry
Vista to Beholden
Stop watch beyond all points
Wings pan our moments
Given heart’s altitude
Vista to beholden
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November 21, 2010 at 1:33 am
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November 21, 2010 at 7:12 am
I love the line – Given heart’s altitude!
Different, yet perfectly fits the picture 🙂
November 21, 2010 at 9:28 am
Thanks for linking up today, Neha. Enjoyed your poem 🙂
November 21, 2010 at 8:58 am
“Vista to Beholden,” certainly does describe the photo well. It truly is a Vista to Behold.
November 21, 2010 at 9:29 am
The image makes me consider seemingly impossible goals…. Thanks for stopping by and posting today, Gigi Ann 🙂 Very nice 🙂
November 21, 2010 at 9:34 am
Love how the depth of the few words you select, enhance the beauty of the photo.
November 21, 2010 at 10:04 am
I think my short lines/poems have been influenced by all the tweeting I do. Thank you for your nice comment 🙂
November 21, 2010 at 9:51 am
Nice one, Adam. I think you captured that photo exactly.
November 21, 2010 at 10:06 am
Just read your post, Glynn. You always write very polished lines that are thought provoking. Cheers
November 21, 2010 at 10:32 am
Vista to behold, few words but with all the beauty spelt out
November 21, 2010 at 10:51 am
Short but twisty, as always, to get the mind around, just the way it should be. Nicely done.
November 21, 2010 at 12:04 pm
Funny you say “twisty.” I’m going to post a challenge piece for Bookstains very soon; the subject is Charles Dickens. These are great prompts. Check it out. Fun stuff 🙂
http://bookstains.wordpress.com/poetry-challenge-what-the-dickens/
November 21, 2010 at 11:58 am
Nicely worded picture Adam.
That photo is stunning
November 21, 2010 at 12:05 pm
Thanks, K. Looking forward to collaborating more with you 🙂
November 21, 2010 at 11:58 am
beautiful write yet again.
November 21, 2010 at 12:05 pm
Cheers 🙂 Enjoy the rest of your weekend!
November 21, 2010 at 12:11 pm
Choice!! words Adam
‘wings’ panned such a panoramic
~ Lib ~
November 21, 2010 at 1:39 pm
Hi Lib. I love panoramic images, and Trent’s photo reminds me of really great ones I’ve seen in print. Cheers
November 21, 2010 at 12:43 pm
I love how you put man’s deep aspiration to have wings so we may with wings “pan our moments”!
November 21, 2010 at 1:22 pm
Short but sweet. You spread your wings about the boundless beauty of the photo, and capture it nicely–“Vista to beholden” indeed. All the world lies before us. Nice work, Dustus!
November 21, 2010 at 1:43 pm
Fantastic job on One Shoot today! Very glad to see your talents being recognized. Can’t wait to read the next one 🙂
November 21, 2010 at 1:57 pm
..wings pan our moments…is beyond beautiful
November 21, 2010 at 2:19 pm
smiles, Claudia
November 21, 2010 at 2:05 pm
I appreciate how four contained lines describe so much. Whether or not intended there are a couple of subtle and lovely wordplays here also.
November 21, 2010 at 2:24 pm
I admit there are a few plays on words in this one 🙂
Thank you, Maureen
November 21, 2010 at 2:45 pm
love the way your words add dimension to what is already a perfect picture
Wings pan our moments
Given heart’s altitude
beautiful
November 21, 2010 at 4:12 pm
I couldn’t be concise today, I loved the photograph that much. Good work here Adam.
November 21, 2010 at 10:06 pm
I love the elegant simplicity of your poem — it is beautiful!
and thanks for dropping by my place too.
November 21, 2010 at 11:20 pm
i love that you captured that sense of ‘this is beyond me’ and worth stopping all to partake/behold. that is the Beauty and why we need it:)
November 22, 2010 at 9:02 am
makes me think adam!
November 24, 2010 at 11:47 am
A gorgeous poem! Open ended to me…
You really capture the visual….
Lady Nyo
November 24, 2010 at 2:28 pm
lovely !!
November 25, 2010 at 12:43 am
Breathtaking!Both the pic and the words!Vista Beholden.Love how its sounds conveys awe and breathtaking beauty!
Amazing how few words can define so much!