4Lines: No Mirror
When thoughts empty echo hunger
And lethargic being replaces thunder
Wonder did you ever ponder?
…No mirror could reflect you fonder
October 23, 2010 at 7:58 am
Nicely written four lines my friend. Your 4 lines say more than people say in many lines. I really like the last line, “No mirror could reflect you fonder.” Just simply wonderful. Hugs and Love Viola
October 23, 2010 at 8:44 am
Hope you have a wonderful weekend, Viola ๐ Hugs & love
October 23, 2010 at 8:19 am
4 words…Your beautiful soul reflected.
Look deeper….
~Shell
October 23, 2010 at 8:47 am
I’m smiling, & looking deeper ๐ Cheers, Shell
October 23, 2010 at 8:21 am
Love the sound of it – it should be read aloud. Perfect.
October 23, 2010 at 8:50 am
Thanks, Neha. I enjoy reading my work aloud. However, I don’t always have time to do so, especially lately. One Shot Wednesday is usually when I’ll post a recording (Flash 55s for the most part too)โwhen I don’t have Writer’s Block. lol Cheers
October 23, 2010 at 9:43 am
The depth of your soul shines in your 4 lines Adam, it is amazing how with so little words you say much more then a thousand..:)
pierced my mind..as i am looking in my mirror right now..:)
*smiling* turning away from the mirror now..:)
October 23, 2010 at 10:21 am
Turn away from that mirror and enjoy the weekend, Abeer! smiling back atcha ๐
October 23, 2010 at 9:50 am
An interesting poem to start my day with over morning coffee…always find your poems quite reflective.
October 23, 2010 at 10:35 am
Enjoy your coffee, Charles. Have a nice weekend:)
October 23, 2010 at 11:37 am
You really are an amazing poet and photographer.
Just love this word combo! Enigmatic.
xo
October 23, 2010 at 12:27 pm
Hey Jannie! Hope all’s well and you’re rocking and rolling ๐ Enjoy the weekend
October 23, 2010 at 2:52 pm
Love this. Have jotted it down. Even the sound of the words leave me relaxed.
October 23, 2010 at 3:16 pm
Awesome. Thanks always, Leslie ๐ Weekends should be for relaxing, though I must admit I was quite agitated when I wrote this one.
October 23, 2010 at 11:22 pm
โฆNo mirror could reflect you fonder
Thats a magical line Adam! This reads like a riddle – fascinating:-)
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October 24, 2010 at 9:47 pm
That line did it for me too …you are sooooooooo clever Adam!! Hope you had a good weekend xxx