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July 26, 2010 at 4:20 pm
Oh this is beautiful! I especially like the last line: “Garden prompts novel” 🙂 Nature’s elements are wonderful and inspiring as I’m currently working on getting imagery together for my next post, romance entwining nature’s sweet impressions! 🙂 ~ I think a garden really could prompt a novel too! *be well ~April
July 26, 2010 at 4:34 pm
Things are well. Thanks, April… Haiku is a challenge for me and probably the best practice for my style trying not to rhyme. Glad you like it. I’ve plenty more and enjoy practicing this form. U B Well 2! cheers
July 26, 2010 at 4:43 pm
Adam, nature has been the universal writing prompt for poets for quite some time…will be interested in the novel it prompted. 😉
July 26, 2010 at 5:07 pm
Working on it, Charles…I believe it all will be a great learning experience, both through universal prompt and creative process 😉
cheers!
July 26, 2010 at 5:08 pm
Really good. I can feel the tempo and the sense of being quickly pushed along. Hope that’s what you intended.
Best wishes.
Lawrence
July 26, 2010 at 5:13 pm
Intended. Tried to capture a “flash of insight” so to speak through the rushed 2 first lines, so the third line reads like a break from it. Thanks, Lawrence 🙂
July 26, 2010 at 6:23 pm
I like this, the last line finishes it perfectly
July 26, 2010 at 6:29 pm
Ladies and Gents… go check out the inaugural episode of the Arts Web Show.
K, you are indeed a one man creative show.
http://artswebshow.com/2010/07/27/web-show-ep-1-cooking-up-a-battle/
July 26, 2010 at 8:16 pm
Garden prompts novel!!! Magic words…just like you Adam x
July 28, 2010 at 9:25 am
Thanks, A 🙂 smiles
July 26, 2010 at 8:49 pm
nice play adam…i definitely like the last line…i find so much inspiration in nature…hope yours grows…smiles.
July 28, 2010 at 9:27 am
Nature inspires creativity.
July 26, 2010 at 10:03 pm
Wow…. such few words, and so oozing of inspiration and melody…
This is a beautiful Haiku, Adam!! You are getting to be an expert at few-word-messages now eh? 🙂
July 28, 2010 at 9:29 am
In general, I think the nature of our technological world requires shorter, impactful messages. Thanks, Kavita 😉
July 26, 2010 at 10:43 pm
Where are there cold feet? 🙂 I’m coming for a visit, if so! All kidding aside, Adam, beautiful Haiku. I like the whole thing.
July 28, 2010 at 9:30 am
Where are they? At the end of my legs. lol
TY, Leslie 🙂
July 27, 2010 at 12:32 am
lovely haiku…novel; a novel about a garden…I see a lot of great and yummy things beginning to sprout from those seeds of your thoughts! Shine on! Heartspell
July 28, 2010 at 9:33 am
Anything I make is not very yummy. Unlike Cheffie and Amanda, not much of a cook here. Yummy things will have to stay confined to writing. lol
cheers, heartspell 🙂
July 27, 2010 at 8:00 am
Ooh, haiku! Me no can write, so me like when someone else do! 🙂
July 28, 2010 at 9:34 am
LOL 🙂
July 27, 2010 at 8:30 am
Love the haiku.. nature definitely is one inexhaustible source of inspiration!!! Very nice ! 🙂
July 28, 2010 at 9:35 am
I agree completely. Nature does inspire creative work. From experience. cheers, Ilakya 🙂
July 27, 2010 at 9:21 am
I can see it as a headline in the paper– “Garden Prompts Novel!” A fun haiku. I’m nominating you for the Pink award for your great web presence. Check my site in about an hour when the post will be up.
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
July 28, 2010 at 9:36 am
Thanks, M. Appreciate your comment and kind gesture.
cheers 🙂
July 27, 2010 at 12:19 pm
I’m waiting to read the novel by my friend Dustus.
Nice Adam
Love from the moon
see ya at One Shot Wednesday
July 28, 2010 at 9:37 am
I’ve more novels to write. Trying to balance my time to do so, L 🙂
July 28, 2010 at 2:37 pm
well done!
🙂
July 29, 2010 at 5:02 pm
10 Q Jingle 🙂
July 28, 2010 at 9:17 pm
That was perfect…
Thanks Adam…G
July 29, 2010 at 5:02 pm
Hey G! I plan to drop my link for 55 Friday tomorrow. Thanks for hosting that.
http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.com/
August 2, 2010 at 2:57 pm
Loved this haiku! Great imagery. Hope you have a great day!
Chloe 😀
August 2, 2010 at 4:44 pm
Have a great day too, Chloe. Thanks 🙂
August 4, 2010 at 10:28 am
How fun! Delightful . . . good luck with the novel . . . keep us “posted.” 🙂