Piece turns over
My thoughtless fault
Conceding time
To feeling lost
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May 6, 2010 at 7:55 am
Adam this is awesome, just simply awesome. Thank you for the birthday wishes. I am growing old gracefully. LOL
May 6, 2010 at 8:20 am
You are awesome, Viola. Enjoy your day 🙂
May 6, 2010 at 8:29 am
very short but empowering one!
Happy Thursday!
😉
May 6, 2010 at 8:36 am
Thanks Jingle. Glad this one has that effect for you. Must admit this poem makes me feel sad
May 6, 2010 at 8:57 am
Short and sweet……….good one,
Peace,
Laz
May 6, 2010 at 9:32 am
Thanks. Enjoying the poetry on your blog…
Short and sweet /
Did make me think
http://lazfreedman.wordpress.com/
May 6, 2010 at 9:40 am
When does one know that they are finished “thinking?” things over in life, huh? Have a great day/ 🙂 Smile.
May 6, 2010 at 9:47 am
Hey Doraz!
Answer: when words you think innocuous hurt unwittingly.
May 6, 2010 at 8:33 pm
OK…. 🙂
May 6, 2010 at 8:46 pm
Sincerest thanks, D 🙂
May 6, 2010 at 9:49 am
very touching and wise.
May 6, 2010 at 9:50 am
Thanks, trisha 🙂
May 6, 2010 at 12:23 pm
Wow that one makes my thoughts go all over the place
missed your post yesterday
May 6, 2010 at 1:19 pm
I like when writing does that, though must say wasn’t trying for that this time. Thanks for checking the blog yesterday, Leslie
May 6, 2010 at 12:50 pm
When I was in graduate school, I would play chess every Sunday with my major professor…this poem reminds me of those days …how thoughtless actions resulted in an awareness that it was time to consede the match…life often has such moments also…well said my friend.
May 6, 2010 at 1:29 pm
Thanks for sharing that story. Reminds me that life is a learning experience 🙂
(and I have much to learn)
May 6, 2010 at 12:52 pm
The time you spend in self reflection is it wasted? Or procrastination? As long as it helps you move forward. A little sad Adam but very deep.
May 6, 2010 at 1:33 pm
Good points, Shan. Time to move forward. Thank you 🙂
May 6, 2010 at 7:04 pm
you’re good at capturing something in just a few words.
Nice one
May 6, 2010 at 7:41 pm
Thank you. Enjoyed your song… http://artswebshow.com/
May 10, 2010 at 7:48 pm
Me got award for you.
http://billmanson.blogspot.com/