Thoughts of thinking
Find us missing
Sentimental
Wishful meanings
What is nothing?
Loving, being
Friendship claims
With words deceiving
Life a journey
Heard believing
Seeing, feeling
Moments fleeting
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April 28, 2010 at 7:54 am
life a journey
and what wonders we can weave
what joys we can find
what sorrows we can share
what love we can find
when we
be love
share sorrow
roll in joy
wherever it is found 🙂
beautiful words 🙂
April 28, 2010 at 8:11 am
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April 28, 2010 at 8:27 am
Hi LunaJune. Always enjoy when you visit 🙂 Love the poetic comment. Thank you; it made my day.
cheers
April 28, 2010 at 9:15 am
wise words!
April 28, 2010 at 9:59 am
I believe it was Zen who said something about men spending so much time trying to define life that they don’t have time to live it….nicely captured in your poem. Cheers!
April 28, 2010 at 10:31 am
I fall into that trying to define life too much category, though I admit I’ve gotten a little better about that over the past year.
Thanks
April 28, 2010 at 10:32 am
Time, like tiny grains of sand slips through our fingers. All we can do is savour what it gives us and remember what it takes with it.
Lovely.
April 28, 2010 at 10:38 am
You state that eloquently. Thanks, Shan. Hope you have plenty of good days to savour.
🙂
April 28, 2010 at 11:22 am
wow. loved the easy flow of the words.
April 28, 2010 at 1:13 pm
Thanks, trisha. I’ve been enjoying the writing process of late 🙂
May 8, 2010 at 3:26 am
writing is like playing with our own feelings, passions and dreams- i too relish writing.
April 28, 2010 at 12:55 pm
Love the poem Adam, of course I like everything you write because you do it so well. Me, I take life as it comes. LOL
April 28, 2010 at 1:18 pm
LOL In theory, I like to go with the flow. In practice, well, I’m getting there. lol Thanks, Viola 🙂
April 28, 2010 at 4:46 pm
wishful meanings can break down the new you and make you a cut out of the old you in reflection! Nice simple yet deep. I’ll be back!
April 28, 2010 at 5:03 pm
Thanks. Your insights and opinions are always welcome here. Appreciate the comment.
April 28, 2010 at 5:14 pm
my comment is fleeting
Nicely worded Adam
April 28, 2010 at 5:23 pm
LOL… long day, my energy is fleeting. lol
Thanks, Leslie 🙂
April 28, 2010 at 5:50 pm
Excellent, as usual.
it has such a fluidic feel to it.
April 28, 2010 at 8:57 pm
Thank you, K. Always appreciate your feedback and insights.
April 29, 2010 at 5:43 am
Beautiful Adam, it is lyrical…I want to sing it !
April 29, 2010 at 6:22 am
I actually tried that—ended up shattering all glass in my house lol
Thanks, Colleen 🙂
May 5, 2010 at 4:48 pm
‘Seeing feeling, moments fleeting’ you have summed up life there Adam in a few words 🙂
May 5, 2010 at 7:42 pm
Thank you, Lynda. You just cheered me up a bit. Actually, just took a post down. I wish I had life figured out.