Life and love
Simplicity
Song
Pair of hearts showing
Already won
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March 1, 2010 at 8:42 pm
very nice indeed, great poem Adam, it doesnt have to be long to be powerful 🙂
March 1, 2010 at 8:51 pm
I’ve been reading a lot of haiku on Twitter but not attempting any lol It has influenced me a bit. Cheers, William
March 1, 2010 at 9:00 pm
Your haidu is better than whatever i’ve ever tried…i like short poems..but don’t like constraints…but you know that all ready…really like what you have written here.
March 1, 2010 at 9:37 pm
I have trouble with haiku because my natural tendency is to rhyme a poem. I feel much less constrained when writing fiction.
March 2, 2010 at 9:33 am
fly with friends,
u travel twice as far,
awesome post!
March 2, 2010 at 9:39 am
Have a good one, Jingle!
March 2, 2010 at 10:54 am
The words dance! 🙂 Have fun today!
March 2, 2010 at 11:06 am
I’m working on some humor, Doraz. Hmm… I wonder what I’ll post lol Have a great day!
March 2, 2010 at 5:08 pm
I love haiku! I am not a writer but draw and paint. Haiku has opened a door to pictures in words for me. I like this. I feel like I’m peeking over his shoulder as he grasps the win literally or figuratively. 🙂
March 2, 2010 at 6:00 pm
Hi Leslie. That’s an interesting statement you make because you paint watercolor scenes so well. Art influences art 🙂 Extremely cool.
March 4, 2010 at 6:15 am
This is a very beautiful haiku!
I imagine all you’ve written there!
Thank you!
Enjoy your day!!! 😉
March 4, 2010 at 6:56 am
Thank you 🙂 You have some great images on your site. The moon shots are awesome. http://2a24.wordpress.com/
March 4, 2010 at 10:10 am
I’m glad that you like it 😉
Have fun!!! 🙂
March 14, 2010 at 7:28 pm
I enjoyed this poem very much!
March 15, 2010 at 7:40 am
Thank you. Glad you liked it 🙂