Out of Place
Falling snow in lamplight glow
Descending crystals magical
Missing more than common ground
Fearing nothing will be found
Estranger than a lonely day
Spirits feign, snickers fake
Anachronistic hints I waste
Reflective leers, out of place
Sidelong cast by eyes mistake
Writing until morning breaks…
Slumber for each chosen line
Lacking heart, fine polish, shine
Go ahead, true help we find
Not Rip Van Winkle losing time
February 25, 2010 at 10:53 am
Well….thank you for all of your time and effort with all of your great words for us! 🙂 Make it a great day! 🙂
February 25, 2010 at 10:59 am
D, I’ve formed the habit of checking your blog for jokes each morning. lol Thanks and have a great day as well 🙂
February 25, 2010 at 7:01 pm
You got it! 🙂
February 25, 2010 at 1:18 pm
i only “met” the guy short time ago on Val’s place..
somewhat happy read. or so i found it..
February 25, 2010 at 2:33 pm
Hi Dhyan. That’s one I haven’t read in many years. I’ll have to revisit after a whole bunch of years go by lol
February 25, 2010 at 4:17 pm
beautiful and thoughtful!
lacking heart, fine polish, and shine..
awesome lines!
😉
February 25, 2010 at 5:03 pm
Thanks. Was just over at your blog. Sounds like you’re having a great day. Enjoy!
February 26, 2010 at 9:33 pm
Sounds like an ode to a not so bad obsession. Nice poem, Dustus.
February 27, 2010 at 6:06 am
Thanks, Leslie. You’re right, not so bad. Had a whole lot bothering me when I wrote that.
March 2, 2010 at 3:21 am
Everyone and everything can have those out of place moments.
Thanks for posting “Out of Place”- gives frame of reference
you are so not out of place 🙂
March 2, 2010 at 7:06 am
I was having a rough day when I wrote that. Things are going well at the moment. Thanks, Leslie.
March 2, 2010 at 10:53 am
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/01/awards-on-the-sunshine-blogger-buddy-and-more/
Happy March!
Enjoy your time and pride!
March 2, 2010 at 11:47 am
How excellent, Jingle! I may have said this before, but if not, what a great way to learn about what everyone else is up to these days. Fun stuff. I find myself cheering for everyone, and that’s by far the best part 🙂