Often forgotten
Sometimes stood still
Awaiting a world
Already fulfilled
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February 23, 2010 at 4:38 pm
I like the line ‘sometimes stood still’ I don’t think I’ve completely lost that child feeling…it goes worse the older I get. Nice little poem – and a very strange building. If I was a child I would be terrified of it – looks like a prehistoric monster lol
February 23, 2010 at 5:21 pm
Rest assured that structure is monster free. lol I’m not sure how I would have responded to it as a child. Most likely my parents would be trying to get me to climb down from it 🙂
February 23, 2010 at 6:41 pm
I like this poem Adam…I could hear Mary Martin singing “I don’t want to grow up”…I think that was who played Peter Pan…I may have to look that one up…anyways loved it!
February 23, 2010 at 7:18 pm
Your comment reminds me of the scene in Finding Neverland when J.M. Barrie makes theater goers watch his play sitting beside kids.
February 23, 2010 at 6:42 pm
PLEASE FEEL FREE TO SELECT AN AWARD YOU WOULD LIKE FOR YOUR GREAT BLOG THAT I HAVE ON MY BLOG! 🙂 PLEASE PASS IT ALONG……. CONGRATS TO YOU!
February 23, 2010 at 7:14 pm
Thank you very much!
February 23, 2010 at 6:44 pm
I need to show this to my kids. 🙂 They are in such a hurry to “grow up!” They are missing out on their childhood, if I let them! I don’t!
February 23, 2010 at 7:08 pm
Yeah, don’t let them! Nice of you to want to show your kids, but for their sake save it for a rainy day. lol
February 24, 2010 at 12:12 am
I like the “Already fulfilled”. I look at my Granddaughter, a life full and fulfilled.
February 24, 2010 at 5:15 am
amazing!
love the post, 😉
February 24, 2010 at 7:25 am
Appreciate that! Thanks & Cheers 🙂
February 24, 2010 at 5:16 am
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/02/23/the-best-blog-award/
an award 4 u.
cheers, 😉
February 24, 2010 at 7:23 am
One of the best things about awards is that they’re usually shared with at least a couple of bloggers I then get to read for the first time. My humble thanks 🙂
February 25, 2010 at 6:17 am
Your words sum it all..
Loved it Adam.
February 25, 2010 at 6:34 am
Thank you, Loreena 🙂 I like your blog
http://nohaemile.wordpress.com/
February 25, 2010 at 7:06 am
Actually Loreena Mckennitt is my all time favorite artist. But my name is Noha 🙂
February 25, 2010 at 8:18 am
oops…My apologies. I got confused by the name under the Simply Me! icon. It’s a pleasure to meet you, Noha 🙂
February 25, 2010 at 9:01 am
Don’t worry 🙂 I often get this.
I guess its my bad 😀
February 25, 2010 at 7:04 pm
Hi, nice poem. I like the way the large scale structure towers over the small house.
February 25, 2010 at 7:36 pm
Thanks. The campus is great for taking pictures.
February 27, 2010 at 2:05 am
This captures childhood, and in so few words — well done!
February 27, 2010 at 6:13 am
Thanks 🙂 Have an excellent weekend!