A Waterfall Crashes
Sweet soulful eyes
Reflect never knowing
What to expect?
As a person
I’m growing
Being drawn from past heartache
Know the direction I’m going
As a waterfall crashes
Life keeps flowing
Sweet soulful eyes
Reflect never knowing
What to expect?
As a person
I’m growing
Being drawn from past heartache
Know the direction I’m going
As a waterfall crashes
Life keeps flowing
October 12, 2009 at 3:36 pm
it is very nice..
October 12, 2009 at 4:56 pm
Thanks for reading my work. I like your blog @ http://utopianfragments.com Some really powerful poetry
Thanks,
Adam
October 13, 2009 at 9:30 pm
thank you adam, that is very nice of you..
October 13, 2009 at 9:55 pm
I look forward to reading more of your work. Cheers.
October 12, 2009 at 6:04 pm
Not to be “punny”, but this flows quite nicely. Makes me wish I could write poetry. 🙂
October 12, 2009 at 6:30 pm
That’s very nice of you to say. Puns are always welcome lol.
Thank you,
Adam
October 13, 2009 at 10:40 am
Thank you. I really don’t set out to write short or long poems on purpose. Sometimes, what’s on my mind translates into poetry with little effort. Other times, well… not so much. lol Appreciate your comment.
October 14, 2009 at 1:47 am
…and like a waterfall, life crashes. I like how no matter which direction you read it, it still makes sense. http://loomingdeadlinescreative.wordpress.com/
maryanne23 🙂
October 14, 2009 at 6:23 am
Thanks you for taking the time to read my work. I enjoyed reading your creative writing and poetry @
http://loomingdeadlinescreative.wordpress.com/ Thanks again. —Adam
October 15, 2009 at 4:09 pm
Nice poetry!
October 15, 2009 at 7:14 pm
‘As a waterfall crashes
Life keeps flowing’
A great metaphor and very helpful for those with past heartache (all of us?!) – thanks
October 15, 2009 at 7:31 pm
Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Glad you liked the poem. Appreciate your feedback.
October 16, 2009 at 10:50 am
This is a superb interpretation on life and how it can change the heart.
October 16, 2009 at 11:20 am
Very nice of you to take the time and comment. I’ll be visiting your blog again soon, so keep writing!
(Great to connect with you on Twitter)
http://kreativoutlet.blogspot.com/
October 19, 2009 at 11:34 pm
Very nice!!
October 20, 2009 at 6:11 am
Thanks, Scott. Glad you like it 🙂
April 11, 2010 at 5:52 am
This is pure heaven- lovely.
April 11, 2010 at 8:21 am
Trisha, I am grateful for your encouragement and comments. I am happy over such feedback. Sincere thanks 🙂